'Give us this day'

This is a painting completed today........image has been slightly cropped as wasn't sure it looked right in its original form. And this is it uncropped:

Since the jury is out at this end over which version works best it would be useful to get other opinions. I'm also in two minds as to whether to scrap this one despite the time spent on it so..........I'll take silence as a sign that it should be consigned to oblivion! smile